Wednesday Writing Tips With Debra Tidball

Debra Tidball is an author with a particular passion for picture books, and she has written a few award-winning ones herself! Her poems, plays and short stories have been published in story collections and The School Magazine. Debra lives in Sydney where she writes with her biggest fan, Archie the French Bulldog, cheering her on.

ANCHORED

My latest picture book is called ANCHORED and it’s for anyone who’s spent time apart from someone they love. It’s about a big ship and little tug boat and the power of love that anchors them together even when separated by oceans. ANCHORED is released today!

It’s illustrated by Arielle Li and published by EK Books.

Hardest thing about writing Anchored!

One of the hardest things about writing the book was making the boats seem ‘human’ so that readers could recognise their own emotions in the boats. It’s called personification, and it’s heaps easier to do if you are personifying animals (especially mammals), as they share a lot of anatomy and feelings with people eg eyes and ears and beating hearts; fear, contentment and excitement.

I knew I was giving Ship and Tug feelings, but I had to work out what other ‘human’ qualities I would give them. I tried to keep with boat terms like engines ‘sparking’ and ‘purring’ to show excitement and contentment, but I couldn’t go past giving them hearts in the end!

Most Fun thing about writing Anchored

The most fun thing about writing Anchored was getting the words just right to convey the emotion needed, and coming up with the concept of the anchor as a metaphor. You might find it surprising that the concept came to me very late in the process, but was a ‘light bulb’ moment that made everything fall into place!

WRITING PROMPTS

  • Write down all the different types of boats/ships you can think of.
  • Imagine you are a boat, what type would you be?
  • What is your purpose? Eg Cargo ships take objects to different places; cruise ships carry people for recreation; Racing yachts are for sport.
  • Who or what is on board?
  • Where would you go?
  • Are you leaving anyone behind or meeting someone at your destination? How do you feel about that?
  • At one point in my story, the sea ‘glitters like crystals and jellyfish dance in shimmering shoals.’ What would you see on your trip?
  • How does it feel to have the water beneath you? Is it ticklish/massaging/spikey/icy cold?
  • How would the water sound?
  • At one point in my story, the ‘swell pulses and grows into a wild beast that crashes over’ Ship’s hull. What danger might you run into? Pirates? Sea monsters? Rocks? Storm?
  • Use these details as a base of a sea-faring story.

Thanks Debra, love these great writing prompts and your book sounds fabulous. Happy launch day!

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Isla’s Family Tree – Happy Book Day!

Katrina McKelveyis a children’s author, former primary school teacher, wife, and mother to two tweenagers and a cocker spaniel. She’s written many children’s picture books and educational readers including No Baths Week,Up To Something, Isla’s Family Tree (April, 2020), and Chasing Rainbows (August, 2020).

She’s highly involved in CBCA, SCBWI, literary conferences and festivals, and loves visiting schools. She’s left-handed, loves tea and rollercoasters, and is addicted to mint chocolate.

ABOUT THE BOOK

Isla’s Family Tree, published by EK Books on 1 April  is a picture book for children aged 4-8 but would be enjoyed by teens and young adults too.

Isla isn’t happy that her family is changing, so her mother creates a clever family tree with Isla to teach her how families always grow. When her mother hands her two new leaves, Isla doesn’t think they belong. She tries to make them fit somewhere, but not on her branch. However, once she meets her new brothers, she has a change of heart and finds room for them after all. A fun book for any family trying to introduce new family members, or show children how they belong in their family.

Download teacher’s notes and a paper doll making activity from the publisher’s website

WHERE KATRINA’S INSPIRATION CAME FROM

This story came to me when my son was five years old. My grandmother had passed just before Mother’s Day in 2012 and I found it interesting that it was so complicated to explain to him how four generations connected together – and that was only a small part of our family. Around the same time, my sister-in-law was studying my husband’s family tree. We had wonderful family discussions about his family history. Also at the same time, I found the TV show ‘Who Do You Think You Are?’ extremely interesting. I wrote down scribbles in 2012 and seriously started writing this manuscript in late 2014.

KATRINA’S FABULOUS WRITING TIPS

  • It took me from 2014 – 2018 to get this story right. Good stories that have a subtle message in the character’s journey take time to get right. That balance between the message and the story is paramount.
  • Ask for professional advice and get a manuscript assessment. As soon as I did, Isla’s Family Tree was accepted for publication.
  • Even though this is my fourth picture book to be traditionally published, I still feel I have loads to learn about creative writing. Keep learning.
  • Picture books have a very unique style about them. Study them and do courses and workshops on how to write picture books specifically.
  • Observe, adore, and follow illustrators. They’ll tell the other half of your picture book story, so leave loads of room for this in your manuscript.

WHERE TO FIND KATRINA ONLINE

Website and blog: www.katrinamckelvey.com

Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/katrinamckelveyauthor/

Twitter: https://twitter.com/katrinamckelvey

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/katrinamckelvey/

YouTube Channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCgfVHAHyIHP14oeEkGl2jtA

Congratulations Katrina and Happy Book Day!

WIN A COPY OF THIS FABULOUS BOOK 

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