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How to Feel for the Right Words – You don’t Need to See Words to Be a Writer

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Maribel writing with JAWS

Today I’m very pleased to welcome Maribel Steel to Writing Classes For Kids.  Maribel is a writer and inspirational speaker living in Melbourne. She has been visually-impaired for most of her life and helps people to discover the ART of being blind.

Today, Maribel is sharing her tips on how to find inspiration by feeling for the right words. Maribel is also sharing two beautiful drawings from her mother’s  school books from Spain in the 1950s!

How to Feel for the Right Words

By Maribel Steel

 Writing is not only about seeing words but hearing them, even feeling them. As a writer who can’t see the computer screen, I can feel for the right words.

I like to play with the sound and feel of new words, collecting them like cool and shiny gemstones. When I am stuck for ideas, I take a look and rummage through the file to inspire a new story.

Hey wait – didn’t I just say I can’t see? Yes, I’m a visually-impaired person but I have a special ‘friend’ called JAWS. No, not that horrible shark eating monster you may have read about or seen on TV. JAWS is a robotic voice that lives within my computer. It’s software that enables me to scoot around the internet, read files, answer emails and write stories.

Feeling for Inspiration

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Marbel’s two children building a lego structure

If I get stuck thinking of where to begin a story, I close my eyes. I imagine the large blue tub of lego bricks my children used to play with and recall feeling interesting curves and edges of their creations.

My children had no plan what they were building, they only knew how to start fitting pieces together, brick by little brick. Pretty soon, they had a complete lego-sculpture.

It’s the same when it comes to writing. You can build your stories like building with lego. One thought sparks a new one to form on top of it.

5 ways to trick your feelings into writing

Here are five ‘tricks’ you can try when feeling around for those foundation words…

Trick 1                  Collect a file of words – your ‘bricks’.

You can gather up interesting words you come across and put them into a file or special journal.

These are words that spark an image for you of some sort: a facial expression, an unusual colour, a lively verb, an old-fashioned word. Any word that excites you enough to want to play with it later.

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Child writing at desk by Piluca Steel (1950 school book)

Trick 2                  The power of silent observation.

Look at one object very closely: your favourite pen, a pair of shoes, a mouldy mandarine. Observe the detail. Now write only one word to describe it. You keep writing only single words to describe its many facets until you have a string of single words. By the end of your observation, you have a collection of descriptive words you can use in your writing that were effortless to find.

Trick 3                  Listen up!

The sound of words fly around you everywhere you go: at home, on the TV, at school, in the street. Are you paying attention with writer’s-ears?  Be alert and catch those sneaky invisible words waiting to inspire your next setting or character.

Trick 4                  Play around in the first draft.

It is only by playing around with words without caring how they fit together in the first draft that will help you start writing your story. By building with your collection of words, other words rise to the surface to be put into place. You have to write a few paragraphs before you get into the real beginning of the story. Go ahead, play and have fun. The first draft is for your eyes only.

Book and Pen Drawing by Piluca Steel

Pen and ink by Piluca Steel (1950 school book)

Trick 5                  Relax and read.

If none of the above tricks are working for you, you might be trying too hard to be creative. Sit back and read the work of other writer’s. You will absorb words, techniques, characters, settings and other styles. As a writer, sometimes the simple trick can be doing no writing at all.

Do you have a writer’s trick you would like to share in the comments? We’d love to hear how you might feel for those words of inspiration too.

Feel free to ask JAWS your questions and Maribel will get back to you. You can find out more about her writing at:

www.maribelsteel.com

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AUTHOR WRITING TIPS – DIANNE WOLFER – ANNIE’S SNAILS

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snailjpeg 001Today I’m pleased to welcome Dianne Wolfer who has a beautiful new book out called Annie’s Snails.

ABOUT ANNIE’S SNAILS

Annie loves her pet snails. She makes them a special home in an ice-cream container and gives them names. Annie and her snails have lots of adventures together. They play spelling games and make trails. Annie thinks the snails will be very happy living in an ice-cream container in her cubby. But will they?

THE INSPIRATION BEHIND ANNIE’S SNAILS

The idea for Annie’s Snails was sparked by a chance comment my husband made about how granddaughter Amelie loved having snails slide along her arms and legs when she was little. The story grew from there.

It was fun adapting this idea to meet the guidelines of Walker Stories. This series is specially designed for beginning readers who are moving from picture books to chapter books. There are three highly illustrated chapters in one book and each chapter is around 600 words. Sometimes when I edited, it felt a bit like doing a new form of haiku!

As a child I always loved animal stories and longed for a pet. We lived on a main road so a dog was out of the question, but I always enjoyed finding small creatures in the back yard. Annie’s Snails touches on this interest and also celebrates the power of imagination. Working with an illustrator is an exciting part of writing for younger readers. Gabriel Evan’s lovely line drawings have added movement and life to my story and I’ve really enjoyed seeing how Gabriel brought my characters to life. I hope young readers enjoy this story about Annie and her Snails. And apologies to parents who may no longer be allowed to dispose of these interesting garden creatures. Since writing this story, I now put my garden snails into the green recycle bin and wish them good luck when the truck comes…

snails7DIANNE’S WRITING TIPS

  1. Just do it. Write whenever you can; as well as setting aside uninterrupted writing time, print a page or two and take it with you to work/other jobs. Edit between appointments. You can rewrite and polish a paragraph in 5 minutes. And those beautiful paragraphs soon add up to chapters and novels.
  2. Always have a notebook/paper in your bag, in the car, beside the bed. When ideas arrive jot them down. Most of my books started this way.
  3. Do a lot of drafts. I do dozens – even for picture books. Read each version aloud so that you hear the rhythm and sound of the story.
  4. Share ‘almost completed’ drafts of your stories with trusted writer friends and readers the age of your intended audience. Listen to their advice, be brave and make changes, but also remember that only you can write your story.
  5. Don’t send your work to a publisher too early. They are busy. You may only get one shot at impressing them. It’s hard to be patient when you think it’s done, but whenever I make myself set aside a story for a couple of weeks, I always see things to fix.

If you have a question for Dianne, feel free to ask it in the comments section of this blog.

Happy writing:)

Dee

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